Black Ghost

Doesn't anyone else feel like critiquing this? *runs away and crys* LOL

That was an interesting story and I liked it. Umm....not much more to say, except I LIKED IT. (again)

Thanks, Snoink, I'm glad you liked it, and I'll be sure to look for the grammatical mistakes

Thank you! At least someone recognizes my genius!

sure thing, if you want to, and OK I am calm now

I liked it but i think you should change the name of the story, it probably would draw more people into reading it.

Thanks, Adam!

ok, ok, sorry I know this is stupid I guess I was just really bored, no one has to take it seriously. and black rose, why are you so uptight? ...

They have some on the other writing site: The Old, dumb, too smart for Yu-gi-oh writers association.

Thanks, guys. Ok, I now that ch. was kinda weird in some places, so I completely changed it, and made the whole chapter focus on Joe's and Molly's dialogue which ...

EXCUSE ME? That was totally out of line! WHAT the heck are you doing? THAT IS NOT HOW YOU REVIEW SOMETHING. Their is no profanity on YWS! Are you some ...

Do you think I need to add anything to this chapter?

How do you stand being so good at poetry? lol, I loved it.

thanks, I will try to replace "Lebanon" with different words in some parts of the poem

good imagery